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发表于 2017-12-20 23:01:33
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本帖最后由 satoshiand 于 2017-12-21 04:10 编辑
As usual, will comment after I finish reading the chapter.
After finishing reading this chapter, how should I say, I actually felt a combination of mixed feelings like "bored, tired and irritated" while i read through the pages.
I felt bored because this story has became the typical shoujo manga illustrating how in love a female lead is towards the male lead. The original essence and attractiveness of the female lead character had been LOST here. The female lead had a very unique character at the start of this manga, but as she fell deeper in love with the male lead, this uniqueness of hers had been lost and she became the typical female lead which you can find anywhere in a shoujo manga. I had seen other manga (which RedFace had also kindly translated before) in which a mangaka had successfully retain the unique characteristic of the female lead while ensuring the couple was lovey-dovey with sweet moments.
I felt tired reading it simply because this chapter is tooo draggy depicting too many inner thoughts of the female lead....I felt as if i was reading a novel which typically conveys the lead character's thoughts in many paragraphs.....But no way, this is a manga not a novel......There is a huge difference between a manga and a novel lorx.....I actually got lost and blank out after reading pages and pages of the female lead's inner thoughts in this 1 chapter.
Lastly, the irritation I felt was because i couldn't see the love the male lead had towards the female lead throughout this entire chapter until the last 2 pages. This chapter was clearly written from the perspective of the female lead and it had shown clearly how in love our female lead was towards the male lead...The chapter would have been better if it actually expresses more on how the male lead felt towards this entire holiday trip with so many disturbances and obstacles ruining his intimate times with his lover....I felt that this chapter is too one-sided and it would had been better if it was two-sided instead.
In all, the above is just my very own personal opinion after painfully reading this chapter and i have no intention to find fault with or offend anyone who disagrees with my remarks.
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